Thursday, November 3, 2011

What I Wrote

           Hey Makala,
     This story you wrote is a very touching story! It is also very sad to hear about the fact that that girl was adopted but didn't know till then.Well,  I hope to hear more of your story!

  Dear Chaun'te,

   This story you wrote is very sweet and full of love!
  Its very sad to hear what has happened to the mother:(
        I hope that you post more about this story so I can read more of it!

Your story is very good and impressive but also very creepy!
You should write more about it!(:

Hello Cesar!
Your poem is very good!
It looks like you will be a very good poetry writer!
Keep it up!:)

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