Thursday, November 3, 2011

What I Wrote

           Hey Makala,
     This story you wrote is a very touching story! It is also very sad to hear about the fact that that girl was adopted but didn't know till then.Well,  I hope to hear more of your story!

http://kidblog.org/MrBoylens2011-12LAClass/makalam/i-wonder/



  Dear Chaun'te,


   This story you wrote is very sweet and full of love!
  Its very sad to hear what has happened to the mother:(
        I hope that you post more about this story so I can read more of it!

http://kidblog.org/MrBoylens2011-12LAClass/ChaunteD/zac-efron-is-my-dad/


Your story is very good and impressive but also very creepy!
You should write more about it!(:

http://yengshinoelblog2.blogspot.com/2011/10/scary-story.html#comments

Hello Cesar!
Your poem is very good!
It looks like you will be a very good poetry writer!
Keep it up!:)
http://cesarnoel2.blogspot.com/2011/10/my-poem.html#comments

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